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Rachel Landrum Crumble's avatar

I love the first poem. Such lush sensory imagery! The second one isn't a poem. It's a commentary.

Ray Zimmerman's avatar

Actually, the second one is a polemic.

Mallory Huffstetler's avatar

I adore both of these poems Ray and I look forward to your upcoming collection 🖤

Ray Zimmerman's avatar

Thank you for your kind words.

Mallory Huffstetler's avatar

Poetry is art and is always in the eye of the beholder 🦋